[Report This]Date: September 08 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how a story like this slipped under my radar, but it was a nice treat to have a full 5 chapter story available all at once.
I'm not done with the story yet but it's already looking like one of my all time favorites!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Keep going with it and let me know what you think
Date: September 08 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! Best story! Please continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad that you came back for chapter 5. I've been waiting patiently for a very long time and feel like the wait was worth it. Your descriptive narratives really paint a picture for the reader and I hope that you continue to write more stories. All the best.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! Now that the baseline canon is established, If I end up writing more with these characters it will likely be in shorter "check-in" style stories. Gives me a bit more flexibility to avoid getting stuck in all the non-sexual continuity stuff that chronological chapter based storytelling writing calls for. I'd also love to see other authors take a crack at spin-off stories if anyone is keen to!
Date: September 03 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
So glad to see this story updated again. A wonderful chapter, just feeling it's a pity that it's ended so early
Date: September 19 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great story! You are very talented! I keep checking back here in hopes that an update will be posted! I feel like I have re-read this story over and over. I hope you haven't given up on it! Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
As a foot guy, I'm still enjoying this sordid tale a lot. I love how the mom is so horny at using her little boy as a tiny toy. I hope he regrets his actions and is used as a pet for mommy's stinky body parts. I hope feet get used a bit, too, and hope his life is eventually snuffed out, as well. :)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
it's interesting to see a butt domination story in which the sub shamefully enjoys the torture. i like it. i also hope it stays mom-oriented, but that's just my preference. not big on sibling stuff.
Date: July 14 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
the incest thing isnt my cuppa, but everything else about this story hits the mark. all the focus on ass, and gas, and that she derives pleasure from doing it to him and he gets off on it too, but is scared. please, please continue. hope they work on him together, or invite another big ass giantess to fart or shit on him.
do wish he was smaller, like less than an inch, but this aint a pizza store.
great writing!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've read through this a few times now. Great setup. Can't wait for the good stuff.
Date: June 20 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've returned to this storyh frequently. I really hope your still willing to add to it, it's one of the best i've ever read.
Love your writing style, the pacing and escalation is perfect. The foreshadowing is beautiful too.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am working on Chapter 4 but I've been very busy and I like to take my time and get it right. More is coming!
Date: May 10 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not to be petty, but do ignore the advice of ShrunkenMazrerunner. Aside from being rather self-centred (fitting your diction to suit his tastes - and as an Irishman I rather enjoy seeing arse and especially bum do the rounds here a bit) it can be damaging to your creative process to arbitrarily place qualifiers on your own writing style. Just let the magic flow out of you. And don't worry if it takes longer than you thought to write a chapter - as my profile will attest, I've had more than my fair share of that problem - your quality will stand by you.
Good luck on the next chapter, I'll be eagerly anticipating it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the backup. I've got to say, your story is one of my absolute favourites and I re-read it regularly. Chapter 4 is on the way but will take some time yet!
[Report This]Date: March 13 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great idea, terriable 1st chapter. There are two main reasons I say this. First, it's not in frist person. I perfer being the charater not hearing what they do. Second, diction. I think it's safe to assume you're of British decent, becuase it shows in your writing. Saying things like "arse" and "bum". I, personaly, find those types of words distracting. Saying "ass" and butt" is easier and will make more sence to everyone. Anyways good idea, bad presitation of that idea.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Not sure I can really agree with your criticism - it's not fair to tailor all the language to a purely American audience , particularly when I as the author am not an American. Nevertheless I've taken to mixing up the asses and arses a bit anyway. Hope you enjoy the next chapter when it hits.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice work! you've set up the plot and characters very well
[Report This]Date: March 02 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see more!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. I really like it when Women dominate men by using their natural bodily scents and tastes. I also like that the mother is still a bit conflicted about using him in all these dirty ways. Creates some suspension when she will finally not be able anymore to hold back.;P
Hope that it will gradually get more extreme though and not jump to the most extreme stuff immediately. Makes it somewhat more believable in my view.
Maybe let him get used to the smell and taste of her sweaty feet more first... let him maybe even lick clean her sweaty armpits (because she has forgot her deo and she claims its an emergency.;) ).
Oh and I like that he is not that unwilling. Meaning he gets turned on by this treatment. Imo that makes the story also more "real" in that sense that it helps the mother (and sister maybe) to overcome their limits since they just use him like he likes it anyway. :)
Another idea could be to introduce other females. Maybe e.g. a female psychiatrist the mother attends after using him as living dildo for the first time. Instead of getting her out of it she could strengthen her in her desires... and might even use him too (so she can properly judge how the mother must feel like. ;P )
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback and suggestions! I'm trying to walk the line between it being semi-consensual, in that Luke is being taken advantage of but undeniably is enjoying it despite his reservations. It's a bit tricky to find the right balance sometimes. Chapter 4 is being worked on now and I hope to have it out relatively soon.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2015 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing. Please keep going and going! This story is one of the most promising on the site.
Date: February 15 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved where this story was going when I first read it and chapter 3 has not been a disappointment, excellent chapter can not wait for 4, love the building of the anticipation and Luke's reluctancey, hate it when its just all oh your tiny let's have sex, ok, you have nailed the build up perfectly great work
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
To me, it doesn't matter if it takes a bit longer to get chapters out, you've created a quality story. Definitely enjoying it so far!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thanks! Progress has begun on Chapter 4 now, so hopefully I'll have something out soon-ish.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a wonderful surprise that this story continues. Look forward to the coming chapters
[Report This]Date: January 20 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed reading this, great set up. Is the story going to continue though? would be a shame to see it end before it's really begun.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The new chapter is out!