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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 52: The Process

Its a little odd to see Jessica moody like this...But then again it IS for good reason! I wonder how Jess is gonna feel when she finds out that it was Tucker that caused this change in her. Will this put some distance between them?



Author's Response:

You'll find out soon enough and thank you for reading. You're continual feedback allows me to know where I am going right or wrong.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 52: The Process

Its rare to see Jessica so angry or anxious about her size. Man she fell hard and although I wanted to point out the flaws but I realised it is possible for a person to break a few bones by falling.



Author's Response:

Yeah it is possible for a person to break some bones after a fall. It happens almost every day everywhere in the world. Also maybe her body was more brittle because it was undergoing a change.

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