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Reviewer: Ebeur Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Best story intro I read for an eternity! Great descriptions. Hope to see this one continued. Some eating, (ass)crush etc. would be perfect. :) Keep on!

Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue! :-) Don't be afraid to slow down a little and take some time to describe things a little more fully. More sensory information really helps the reader feel more engaged. I really enjoyed the growth scene and can't wait to see what happens to Kasey.

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