[Report This]Date: January 31 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Doug's Story
OMG. I love this story. I finally got an account on here just to review it. It is so fun and so different. I really like the author's writing style - I'd love to see more from this author!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. You can find more of my work on DeviantArt, which is where I usually post: http://grapehyacinth.deviantart.com/
[Report This]Date: May 28 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 8: Laughing With Authority
Fantastic story and developing ideas. I think it would be very cool to see one of the guys (probably Doug) turn into one of her body parts, maybe even her foot, where she can wear another guy as her shoe, and explore how that would feel.
But great story. Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thanks! We'll see how it goes... just put in a new chapter, so hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: May 21 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Doug's Story
Your writing is impeccable. I'm intrigued to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the great rating & review. I'm glad you're enjoying!
Date: May 04 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Growing to Freedom
A carp and a goldfish ? Pretty original. I wonder what will happen between them. And I love suspense !
Author's Response:
;)
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Porcelain and SIlk
The sex scene is pretty good. I like it. You proof to be a shrunken man has its advantages. I rated you for this.
Author's Response:
Thanks...there should be much more in both areas!
[Report This]Date: April 21 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: Round of Punishment
Not bad. Humans are turned into objects so they're treated like objects. Logic, and I'm logic by nature. I rated six because you make new fantasies with old ones. Example : the gumball to use vore fetish. Excellent !
Author's Response:
Thanks! Putting a spin on old favorites can be fun. :)
[Report This]Date: April 18 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: It's a Small World
Tha was uhh...wow. I've read some object transformation stories before, but this was definitely different.
The transformation into clothing sounds really hot though. It reminds me of a song I heard when I was younger: "I wanna be your underwear" or something similar.
I'm intrigued. If you keep writing then I'll keep reading. ;-)
Author's Response:
Read on for the clothing!!!!
Date: April 08 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 : Tommy's Tale
This made me think of some kind of fucked up "Beauty and the Beast".
I like it, for some reason I find it erotic yet... Hilarious.
Author's Response:
Glad you got a laugh as well...I like to write with a bit of humor whenever possible.
Date: April 08 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Doug's Story
It's one of my greatest stories I ever see. Go on, I like it! And maybe you can add some accident. :)
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it! An accident might be just the thing...we'll see... ;)