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Reviewer: Smushed Boy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2014 11:06 AM Title: A Smelly, Crushing ride, but not the type your thinking of

Honestly, I really like this one.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! what did you like best?

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 7:46 PM Title: A Smelly, Crushing ride, but not the type your thinking of

Honestly Mr.E your foot content is probably some of the best on this site. Don't get me wrong, there are plenty of awesome writers, but when it comes to feet you gotta be in the top ten.

The fourth paragraph of this chapter was especially great. You covered virtually every angle of the in-shoe scenario.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I try to be very descriptive and paint a picture of what the tiny is going through.

After reading that, I'm sad to say that these past 2 chapters were about 90% of the foot material in this story.  From now on it's going to be mostly booty.

Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 2:49 PM Title: A Smelly, Crushing ride, but not the type your thinking of

You have my attention.

Now keep it.



Author's Response:

I dont think I can. this story is about to take a huge turn, a complete 180 from what i've been writng so far. I know the type of giantess stuff your into and this is not it. this is only the beginning and it only gets worse from here on out. but thanks for reviewing this far!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 1:08 PM Title: A Smelly, Crushing ride, but not the type your thinking of

Building suspence...  He's a..... What?  What is he?  Ah, I'll bet he's an escapee from the detention hall being punished by the schools new doctor... Maybe?  Ha ;)



Author's Response:

it's very depraved. but you were closer than what i expected. he's technically an escapee. and it's not a doctor but a nurse instead

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