Date: April 21 2014 10:36 AM Title: A Harrowing Journey
great start
Author's Response:
Thanks :) Hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: April 17 2014 8:27 PM Title: A Harrowing Journey
You are truly a master of descriptive writing. Your stories keep bringing me back over and over again.
My god, see what you've done! you've made me an addict.
Author's Response:
Mwahaha :P Thats how its done, give them a taste, then ramp up the game ;)
Dont worry, not too long until the next chapter, i'm just getting my head round how to convincingly reduce the girl's tiny friend into the girl's favourite new toy hehe
Date: April 14 2014 8:02 PM Title: A Harrowing Journey
Couldn't have said it any better then wordsmith, great review for the start of another great tale, you truly are a master story teller.
Author's Response:
awww hehe thanks hun, the secret to my writing is that i actually put tiny humans through the horrors i write about in my stories, and film it. Then i can play them back and make sure i get all the right details, action and emotion into the stories.....
(I WISH!! LOL!)