Date: September 11 2017 9:19 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
OH I WANT THIS COMIC TO CONTINUE SOO FRWAKEN BAD... :). Honest I truly think the concept behind this is brilliant. Please please please please please continue. You are truly a talented writer, and I especially feel this story has lots of potential.
Date: December 09 2014 1:32 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
Wow just wow..... i really love all your stories. Especially when there ist scat and fart content. And this story just blew my mind. The setting is so hot. Pease continue the story it would be a shame if this was it. And i would love to read a lot more of your stories:)
Thanks again for your awesome work and please excuse my poor english i am from germany
Date: June 05 2014 10:00 AM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.
Hope to see more of your stories soon.
Unfortunately I am taking a permanent haitus from writing. My life at the moment is so hectic that I can't find the feeling to write. I even had to give up on my collabaration with Gadget91 on the story we were doing together because I couldn't write. It sucks 'cause I enjoyed writing ut I afraid I won't be doing anymore anytime soon. Still enjoy reading though =)
Date: March 30 2014 6:09 PM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.
Great chapter. I loved how you brought the older sister connection in
Thank you. I often like bringing in connections to give the chapter more meaning. If it was just a random chick it would be nice. But the fact that it was her loving older sister makes it ten times better.
Date: March 30 2014 9:22 AM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.
WOW, I really love your stories, I readed the shrink ray adventures wich was very very good, and this one, amazing! Your writing style is really good, onjoyable and simple to adapt to, what happens is also very interesting. Hope you'll continue for long with this one with dofferent sorts of material aside from Lora's stomach, like feet ect. Anyway you do what you want, just continue!
Thank you. It is always nice to know that people like my writing. This story is actually only going to go on for another two chapters or so. I'm trying to write shorter and shorter stories rather than the long ones I usually write. But thank you again for your kind words. They mean a lot.
Date: March 27 2014 3:55 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
when in another chapter
I said before that I wouldn't be able to write chapters becuase my laptop was broken. However, since then it has been foxed so I can't use that as an excuse. The main reason is that the build up of the story is much easier to write then all the erotic content. I'm finding it hard to write in such a way that it will be entertaining. Plus this story has become somewhat popular and I don't want to write a really good first chapter and shitty second and third chapter.
Date: March 26 2014 4:51 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
Dont want to sound like talking other people down, but please just ignore everything what benja said ... Unaware should stay unaware, especialy because there are so rare good unaware stories. It's also always so annoying if people try to talk auhtors to quit unaware writing, just sigh.
Hi, don't worry, I do plan on keeping this unaware. I much prefer unaware since you don't have to write intereaction between the giantess and the victim. However, I have some bad news. I spilled drink on my laptop which means I won't be able to continue writing until I get it fixed or get a new one. Right now I'm using the computers at my school. I hope you understand and I promise I shall continue this story once I have the ability to.
Date: March 26 2014 2:54 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
Hey great story:)
Pls let some of them survive it and than get crushed when the giantess is shitting on them.
She discovers her old most hated teacher in her crap and thinks she could punish her by shitting on her multiple times
Hi, thanks for your review. I appreciate your advice but I would prefer to continue writing unaware. Some of them might survive but not in the way you have suggested. I hope you continue to enjoy reading.
Date: March 25 2014 3:59 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
Amazing story so far, really great planed plot, Im in love with the Lora character, how careless, dumb, bored and ignorant she treated the personal in the lab, literally dont give a shit about it ;) Hope to see it continue really soon, keep up the fantastic work. Totally fav!!!
I am amazed at how popular tis story has become so quickly. I can garuntee that this story WILL be continued since it has such high demand. And don't worry, I haven't finished showing Lora's rude and obnoxious personality.
Date: March 25 2014 2:37 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
I like your thinking of letting one or 2 live but not rescuing them :). Great story so far
Thank you. Yes, letting two or so survive would be a nice ending. I was thinking of making them a lovers couple who bond and develop a relationship as the story goes along. And they finally defeat overwhelming odds and survive digestion only to be flsuhed down the toilet or something. What would you like to see?
Date: March 25 2014 1:51 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
AMAZING, great concept and almost everything has been set up for a great story, continue like this, but please, if possible don't let your other great worksfall into oblivion (;
I am curious as to what you meant by "almost everything has been set up". I am always looking to improve so lpease tell me what i could have improved. Any criticism is welcome =) Oh, and don't worry. My other works won't fall into any sort of oblivion. But when I get tired of writing one sort of story I simply begin another to keep ideas fresh. Then I go back to my old stories once I've had a little while to think about them.
Date: March 25 2014 1:34 PM Title: What a boring school lesson.
I really like where this is headed and I'm looking forward to more.
Thank you. i am having trouble keeping the next chapter fast paced and exciting like this one has been. Hopefully I finish it soon.
Date: March 25 2014 5:51 AM Title: What a boring school lesson.
No! Please continue in this style, it's so damn awesome. For example how you make her be that "dumb shit" like girl, not smart, most of the time bored, rude to "strangers", like calling "smarter" guys weirdos and such. Also I would say she had no idea at all how a digestive tract would work or what horrors might be it in there if you were ant sized. I hope youll continue on this sarcastic, "toilet joke" style of her for example too, with a fitting ending of the students ending her having an ordinary toilet visit, maybe she didnt even remember what she was told or didnt take it serious, like "yeah whatever, I know what Im doing, or what could be wrong or bad about it". Also most people think just the stomach "does" the hard work, or the whole digestion process, but the small intestine is even a much horrible place, having much stronger digestive fluids in it, the whole air/atmosphere would be like hell, the smell, the humiation, acid/digestive enzyms dripping of the walls. there could be a scene where everything seemed "calm" and then an digestive enzym blob would slowly drop off the wall onoe one of the unlucky students, dissolving him and the others having to see him being reduced to a skeleton. also the moment when the stomach would empty itself in the small intestine, it would be like them at first thinking "maybe we still have a chance to survive this", and when they arrive at the other end of the stomach exist, they would instantly gag from the horrible smell inside of it and be like "noo, maybe this wasnt the best ideas at all leaving the stomach". trying to run back but the exit muscle already shut tight. it could also be that one of the students has the "brilliant" idea that they should go the "natural way/exit", and heknows what he is talking about and it would be safe for them, like much safer than staying inside the stomach. of course this is totally wrong but the others believe him, and so they try to bump against the stomach exit muscle, which causes it to get iritated and suddenly bumpb open, like a burp sucking air into it, taking the group with it. just like a frog suddenly would open his mouth and suck something in with the air flow. and on the other side most of them suddenly would get sick and they have to gag/even vomit onside the small intestine "floor"; which would be a very ironic scene.
Date: March 25 2014 4:27 AM Title: What a boring school lesson.
I really liked your mentioning of different air pressure parts. I could imagine an ironic/sarcastic death by a gas/later fart bubble passing by and one of them getting envoled inside and because of the different pressure he/she gets blown apart like being compressed into air inside, and the gas bubble would just pass by later on being "passed by". I would see this to be more logical and realistic though. I am not a fan of unrealistic digestive parts, where people just can "walk through". in real world everything would become waste, especially at this size, no survival chances :x and the deathes would be way, way horrible. I am really curious right now, thank you for making this story, it's mostly the only story right now I am looking after, sadly no good story was made this year on here :( until now :x
When I said that it wasn't going to be completely realistic I meant it wasn't going to be realistic as in every detail possible. I'm not a biologist and so can only imagine what is in the intenstines. However I have taken biology and so know the different processes. Don't worry, there won't be any of that simple walking through the intestines like they're on a sunday stroll. It will be incredibly toxic and dangerous. I meant that I would use the "future technology" card so that They might survive a little longer than they would have otherwise. Although I am finding it hard to continue writing in this style since I keep trailing off and making the most simple things super long. But I'll get there.
Date: March 25 2014 2:09 AM Title: What a boring school lesson.
This is the best and most promising story on here since months. And It's mostly your best story so far. The plot is fantastic, the setup intense, everything is just great, the irony, the "bad luck", the sarcasm parts, how the girl is a stupid character, not smart, loved that part of where she said "yeah will keep my shit for you weirdo", how she was just bored of everything, so great. I also like the size used. If I could wish for something it would be of course all would die, thats for sure, just ending as nothing but bones and hair in her crap. The deaths could be made differently like one falling into some digestive enzyms and being dissolved instantly, some making it "in one peace" still inside the small intestine and there would meat an even more horrible digestive fate, where they at first thought they maybe had a chance to survive this and come out the other end in one piece, until they would meet the true digestive nature of her small intestine, how the air would be thousand times worse of smell, the air even more humid, and the digestive fluids in there even stronger than the stomach acids, because of it being alkaline solutin and digestive enzymes. some deaths could also be ironic/sarcstic, for example one could get caught in a small air bubble and get even inside the large intestine, or maybe "half", like one part of the body gests digested and one is still "in one piece". one of the kids could become nothing just like a gas bubble as the result of the digestion, and end as part of a larger fart the girl would release the next day. and the ending could also have lots of great ironic twists. looking so much forward for this story now!! really great job. insta fav :]
AWW, thank you so much. I guess this new writing style I'm using is working. I tried to leave out detail and just leave in important stuff so I don't write chapter after chapter of the same thing like I do with all my stories. I shall continue this style and hopefully be finished in two or three more chapters. So, you want them all to die? Well, that would be fun but I think I'll let one or two of them survive (I didn't say they'd be rescued though). I am going to make many different deaths and they will have different reactions. Like when one of the twins die and the other one doesn't or when the boyfriend/girlfriend sacrifices the other to save their life. Many things I can do. However, it sin't going to be super realistic. If it was then they would never make it out of the small intestine. (I'll just cover those moments with "future technology saved them"). I did laugh at you comment about how you wanted them all to die, though. If this was a show I imagine you would be the person at the back of the romm screaming "Burn them all!", that made me laugh a bit. Different air types and air pressures will be key factors in this story. I will try and demonstrate just how alien the inside of the girls body is. Well, thank you once again for such a positive review. I hope I can continue to satisfy. I might even start to write the first chapter now with your words of encouragement. Please feel free to comment when ever you like.