Date: March 24 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Care and Keeping of a YouPet
Ooh, this sounds interesting. All the sweeter knowing the YouPet will be in a constant state of anxiety by knowing exactly what's coming. I wonder if youpets can "bounce back" so to speak? One miniscule error I picked up on: “Why should?” the real Jennifer smirked, raising an eyebrow with amusement as she gazed down at her cloned pet. "Why should" should read "why should I?" Otherwise it doesn't make much sense.
Author's Response:
Thanks for catching the typo. I guess in my excitement to post these chapters I've gotten sloppy.
Date: March 24 2014 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Care and Keeping of a YouPet
She relished the sight of her fingers’ individual shadows moving and intermittently blocking out the light for the little copy of herself. So much power, and it was all hers"
God, I love this detail.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it!