Date: September 03 2014 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Finally got caught up on this story. I'd love to have the doctors story fleshed out more it sounds really interesting. Also the size of the giantesses is great. I'm also very glad to see this story back. Truly a great read.
PS are there any female servants?
Date: September 02 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Crylog, I'm very much enjoying your story so far. While I've never seen the movie this is based off, I feel like that's hardly a problem because the story stands well on its own. The world you've built is very detailed and fleshed-out, and it seems like everything has a reason. I actually think the best part of your story is the dialogue -- it's very lifelike and natural.
My only criticism would be this: while the meat of your story is very enjoyable, there are a few areas of weak writing that could be polished up a bit. You have a few misspellings here and there that could be fixed (not a big deal, really), but a bigger issue is some of the run-ons/choppy sentences that occassionally crop up. One trick that I've always found helps is reading your stories out loud: that helps for identifying areas that don't flow well.
Either way, I've loved reading your story so far, and I look forward to more chapters. Definitely got my fingers crossed for more foot action! Thanks again for the fun read.
Date: March 22 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow amazing story so far I love the great new world you've set up so far. I'm enjoying the descriptive style of your writing and those dominant aristocrats are incredible I hope there is plenty more where this came from. Keep up the great work.