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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 8:11 PM Title: Movie Date

You know the best part about writing in the first person is all the witty banter you can add to the story and have it be totally natural.

Man. I am really loving this story. Sorry for review bombing btw.



Author's Response:

I'll happily take any and all reviews lol. Glad you're enjoying it so much

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 1:17 PM Title: Movie Date

It would've been more appropriate if the two of them had been watching some version of "Frankenstein." Because, I think Robby has just created a "monster!" ;-D

Reviewer: Sonicfan287 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 1:12 PM Title: Movie Date

This story has been well written throughout and obviously this latest chapter only further intrigues me. Im loving his interactions with his girlfriend and how they're both adjusting to his new size 

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 10:06 AM Title: Movie Date

Hey, great chapter.  Nice to see that society's attitudes on shrunk people seem to vary.

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