Date: March 13 2014 5:04 AM Title: Victim found
It was a great chapter. Emily and Casey are very mischievious beings, and I hope to see more of this story. When and how(her unaware disposal by Marie) will poor Sandra go "missing" and nobody but Marie notices? I guess we'll have to stay tuned!
Well, I try and make the two characters complement each other so I hope they fit well together. Sandra (The one who shall go missing) Will disappear doing her going away party (Ironic, I think). Her disappearance wil also be quite entertaining and won't just be a simple *poof* gone. It's have its' own chapter. However, I don't know when the going away party is- Meaning I don't know How many chapters I'm going to write before I get up to it. Really depends on how many ideas i get I guess But I do won't to try and give her some character developement so that her disappearance means something. Thank you for your kind words and I hope you'll continue reading =)
Date: March 10 2014 10:19 PM Title: Victim found
Great Chapter. The Blonde girl is Marie, the Jasmine girl is the girl that's "going away" soon right?
I might have mis wrote the chapter but I believe the girl who is "Going away" is sandra (Small red-head) and marie is the blonde girl. The jasmine girl is actually a mistake. I apparently can't keep track of my characters names for 2 chapters. The blonde girl (The victim) is marie. There is no girl named jasmine. I have edited the chapter to correct my stupid mistake. Thank you very much for pointing that out to me. If there are any other inconsitencies please don't keep them to yourselve 'cause I'm apparently too stupid to keep a story consistent =)