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Reviewer: mariothejumpman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is perhaps the best foot play story that I've found. I look foward to reading your other works!

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start, hope to see more!



Author's Response:

That... was it. Might explore the concept again later, though.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Short and Sweet. I enjoyed how the character interaction was also balanced with the main characters thoughts. 

Good Job.

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

You did a nice job with this.  Authors often underestimate the raw punch of a small, self-contained narrative such as this.  The foot-focused action was fun and the subtlety of the character personalities was well-handled.



Author's Response:

Hey, nice to hear that from you. I really want to work on facial descriptions, the girl I have in mind for this is just plain looking, idly scratching the sole of her foot. I can't DESCRIBE that, though, it's hard ._.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

More please, more.

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