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Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Dang, that Malarkey Johnson, sure is one long-winded Yankee!  Wonder if-en, he ever took a little snort a-somthun er nuther? 

I reckon so...  heh,heh,heh



Author's Response: Danged, if that weren't a knee-slapper. X-D

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

Sorry, my pun obcessed mind (which you can relate to) just thought of "the Sand blast kid."



Author's Response: Only if he were a silicon-based member of the LSH.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Red Bear. He’s apparently never met Becky before.

Strange how the more I read your style of writing, the more I start to develop an odd appreciation for it. The short chapters are a nice change of pace.



Author's Response: Thanks. The brevity was initially a necessity, as my previous pc kept auto-timing out after one thousand words! Now, it's just personal preference.

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