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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Why not write it on a word document or something like that then copy and paste it over?

Author's Response: My home computer isn't dot-doc compatible.

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Date: September 20 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 17

Just like your style of writing, it really feels like the genre you're covering, something which a lot of people( myself included) would struggle to do on this site. The only criticism I have is that you should write longer chapters. 

Author's Response: Thank you, very much. :-) As to longer chapters? I count it a minor miracle when I can do over a thousand words without this website auto-timing out. Forcing me--more often than not--to retype and repost the entire chapter as two separate ones!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

and you'll probably think of another chapter soon. I do with some stories and still haven't had time to write them out.

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Date: May 02 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

And after that... 50 Shades of Giantess. Sorry, this time when it comes to clever comments, interesting observations or good puns, this time I've got nothing.

Author's Response: Well, you can't win them, all. ;-) Besides which, the title of the other Western pastiche was supposed to have a moral double-meaning. But, perhaps, I was being too subtle in its usage.

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Date: March 17 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

This here be thuh best li'l bit o' vore ye done fer a powerful long time.

Author's Response: Why, muchos gracias, pardner!

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Date: September 03 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well actually, it was very CHEEKy humour.

Author's Response: "Ask, and thou shalt receive." ;-)

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Date: September 03 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm liking Becky more and more, all the time...

She couldve completely taken over the world back then, and,... been one hell of a saloon girl TOO!  ( Whao, I just thought of 'Ms Kitty' from 'Gunsmoke' standing at fifty feet tall!)

'Holy Macker/ 'Malarkey-AL' .  'em-R some Mighty Big un's thar lil Lady!'


Author's Response: Super-LOL!

Reviewer: Hank the Boggle Champion Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow awesome start to the story, will be reading more. You should check out the western I'm writing since I am assuming you are a fan of the genre. Who is your favorite western actor?


Author's Response: My top five favorites would be: John Wayne; Randolph Scott; Audie Murphy; Clint Eastwood; and James Garner.* *The latter almost steals the show from the racial tension between Dennis Weaver and Sidney Poitier's characters in DUEL AT DIABLO!

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Date: May 31 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Quite literally as expected from a hundred foot girl.

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Date: April 08 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

'Slack-jawed amazement', and - I'll bet that she would have smiled at something else, that he would have had showing between his front pants pockets!  :P

Author's Response: That's assuming he would be wearing pants (rather than a breech clout). Lol!

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Date: April 08 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

You sure know all these gun details well.

Author's Response: Trust me; they're more fascinating to read about than use. And, based on what I've read, I don't EVER want to use one!

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Date: April 08 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good thing those bullets didn’t hit her in the eye; a mosquito bite in the eye would hurt!

Author's Response: Good point. ;-)

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Date: April 06 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Dang, that Malarkey Johnson, sure is one long-winded Yankee!  Wonder if-en, he ever took a little snort a-somthun er nuther? 

I reckon so...  heh,heh,heh

Author's Response: Danged, if that weren't a knee-slapper. X-D

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Date: April 06 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

Sorry, my pun obcessed mind (which you can relate to) just thought of "the Sand blast kid."

Author's Response: Only if he were a silicon-based member of the LSH.

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Date: April 06 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Red Bear. He’s apparently never met Becky before.

Strange how the more I read your style of writing, the more I start to develop an odd appreciation for it. The short chapters are a nice change of pace.

Author's Response: Thanks. The brevity was initially a necessity, as my previous pc kept auto-timing out after one thousand words! Now, it's just personal preference.

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Date: April 01 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

This chapter has its ups and downs (with the scroll bar, that is, every time a translation is needed) LOL

Author's Response: It is my unalterable belief that one asterisk fits all. Now, if only I could apply to that hospital gowns, I'd make a fortune!

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Date: April 01 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Uh Red Bear, I don’t think you realize who you’re talking to! BTW, how do you know so much about guns?

Author's Response: Relax! It's just pure armchair research. :-)

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Date: March 15 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh dear. Can we BEAR to wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I couldn't "bear" to interrupt your litany of counter-puns. ;-)

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Date: March 15 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

galloping and eloping all in the one chapter. Any other pings to come?

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