Date: September 20 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Just like your style of writing, it really feels like the genre you're covering, something which a lot of people( myself included) would struggle to do on this site. The only criticism I have is that you should write longer chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you, very much. :-) As to longer chapters? I count it a minor miracle when I can do over a thousand words without this website auto-timing out. Forcing me--more often than not--to retype and repost the entire chapter as two separate ones!
Date: May 02 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
And after that... 50 Shades of Giantess. Sorry, this time when it comes to clever comments, interesting observations or good puns, this time I've got nothing.
Author's Response: Well, you can't win them, all. ;-) Besides which, the title of the other Western pastiche was supposed to have a moral double-meaning. But, perhaps, I was being too subtle in its usage.
Date: September 03 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm liking Becky more and more, all the time...
She couldve completely taken over the world back then, and,... been one hell of a saloon girl TOO! ( Whao, I just thought of 'Ms Kitty' from 'Gunsmoke' standing at fifty feet tall!)
'Holy Macker/ 'Malarkey-AL' . 'em-R some Mighty Big un's thar lil Lady!'
Author's Response: Super-LOL!
Date: July 24 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow awesome start to the story, will be reading more. You should check out the western I'm writing since I am assuming you are a fan of the genre. Who is your favorite western actor?
Author's Response: My top five favorites would be: John Wayne; Randolph Scott; Audie Murphy; Clint Eastwood; and James Garner.* *The latter almost steals the show from the racial tension between Dennis Weaver and Sidney Poitier's characters in DUEL AT DIABLO!
Date: April 08 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
'Slack-jawed amazement', and - I'll bet that she would have smiled at something else, that he would have had showing between his front pants pockets! :P
Author's Response: That's assuming he would be wearing pants (rather than a breech clout). Lol!
Date: April 06 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dang, that Malarkey Johnson, sure is one long-winded Yankee! Wonder if-en, he ever took a little snort a-somthun er nuther?
I reckon so... heh,heh,heh
Author's Response: Danged, if that weren't a knee-slapper. X-D
Date: April 06 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Red Bear. He’s apparently never met Becky before.
Strange how the more I read your style of writing, the more I start to develop an odd appreciation for it. The short chapters are a nice change of pace.
Author's Response: Thanks. The brevity was initially a necessity, as my previous pc kept auto-timing out after one thousand words! Now, it's just personal preference.
Date: April 01 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter has its ups and downs (with the scroll bar, that is, every time a translation is needed) LOL
Author's Response: It is my unalterable belief that one asterisk fits all. Now, if only I could apply to that hospital gowns, I'd make a fortune!