Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 20: Marauders

Im glad you are deciding to break up the trip to Lindale with all these little side conflicts, it really adds to the sense of JUST how dangerous the world in this story truly is! And I can really apprechiate how terrifying an enemy the catgirls are!

I mean you can blow a hole in them and so long as they have some soldiers or meat to munch on they can get back on their feet in no time flat! It's almost as if the worse enemy of humans fighting a cat girl is the humans themselves, because as soon as one of them is eaten the catgirl can heal itself!

I kind of find it odd that nobody thought of creating a bomb that would detonate when someone dies or something like that. You know, so if a catgirl grabs a body then it would self destruct, inflicting damage but also cutting off the catgirls supply of flesh to eat.

Or to be safer, have a bomb trigger attached to a tooth or something so that they can self-detonate with no hands, once they are in the grip of a catgirl or in her stomach...I don't know but it makes sense to me. Great chapter by the way!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it. And yep catgirls are terrifying for a reason.

 

Yeah they were made to be the ultimate shock troops in a sense. Ones that kill your people and, by killing them, can come back for more punishment.

 

I will say the thought has been thrown around by the Resistance, but they need all their explosive stuff for bombs, rockets, guns, etc... Its not that they wouldn't be willing to do it, most people would rather suffer a quick BOOM death rather than be slowly digisted, but they just don't have the resources to give everyone a dead man switch.