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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 8: Enemy Mine

Derek and Jacob: like father/like son.

*Shakes head in unalterable pity.*

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 8: Enemy Mine

I feel sorry for Jacob. He takes a chance to prove himself competent, and screws up royally. It seems clear now what his character arc will be about

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 8: Enemy Mine

So Jacob was that resistance member that Aviel captured. I don’t like Jacob, though. Even if his reasoning for attacking Pyrhha was justified (hint: It wasn’t) he almost fucked up their plan to save hope and would have gotten hundreds of people killed to satisfy his own need for vengeance. Absolutely pathetic. Even I wanted to punch him in the face for attacking Pyrrha.

 



Author's Response:

Indeed he was. To be fair to Jacob, it was kinda in the heat of the moment type thing and he did recognize it was stupid at the end. Not justifying him at ALL, just saiyan.

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