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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Can't Escape the Past

Take all the time you need. You can't go deep enough into this world and its characters.

@Carycomic: Analyze all you want. It's interesting to read.



Author's Response:

Don't tempt me. We will never get to Act 3 if I went as deep as I could go. Be deeper than Sanders will be in Lutic- I MEAN.

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Can't Escape the Past

So hard to get a good read on Lutice which makes her such a facinating character. Next chapter should be a doozy.



Author's Response:

I will admit, Lutice is one of my more favorite characters. Still not my favorite though, and who it is will remain a mystery for now.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Can't Escape the Past

Lutice, not turning in Sanders? A military organization not under the direct control of the Society? Startling developments, indeed! With regard to Lutice, I'd say it was due to her earlier attempt to take him as her love-slave. She now gets to fulfill that intention, and there's nothing he can do about it! Because the only alternative (for now, anyway) is to be turned over to the Society as a traitor and potential flight risk. As to the NAMF? If their founders/leaders discover the truth about the Great Shrinkage (or whatever title the Society uses, in public, for the event that helped bring them to power), their autonomy will provide the Resistance with a valuable (and, frankly, much-needed) ally.

Sorry; I tend to get over-analytical with riveting stories like this one.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 4: Can't Escape the Past

Lutice is definitely coo coo for cocoa puffs when it comes to Sanders. I still think she’s more mentally unstable than evil or just a yandere. 

 



Author's Response:

For Sanders sake, lets hope you are right. And not getting yandere mixed up with tsundere....

 

Anyone else getting the mental image of Pyrrha and Lutice fighting over Sanders now?

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