[Report This]Date: April 18 2014 11:00 PM Title: Prologue
Date: April 18 2014 10:59 PM Title: Prologue
I might have missed it in my little binge read (My tablet is terrible for long term reading), but how do the giantesses view tinies? On one hand they are 'defending' them, then using those not in the cities as experiments. Otherwise a great read. I like stories that aren't just smut, and the story progression and the world building is great! Look forward to seeing more!Author's Response:
It varies from giantess to giantess.
Some are like Isabella and view tinies as people and themselves as soldiers sworn to protect them. Others, like Lutice, view them as nothing more than their playthings.
Date: April 18 2014 8:45 PM Title: Prologue
Not much really happened in this chapter, so it was kind of a meh chapter but I'm sure things will be getting a lot more interesting from here on! I look forward to updates!
[Report This]Date: April 04 2014 6:39 PM Title: Prologue
Damn dude, this chapter was chock full of content! In one chapter we got: character development for both Sanders and Lutice, an epic fight scene with the odds stacked against our hero, more information into the tevhnology the Society posesses, and an excellent smut scene!
My only complaint is that we dont get smut more often, you write it so well! I have nothing but praise for this chapter, I think this one definitely tops even the best chapters in the first story!
Author's Response:
Yeah... I try to get it in, but I don't want to shove smut in for smut sake. Doing that tends to ruin the scene and make it less impactful AND makes for a jarring experiance. Kinda odd to go from life and death struggle to AND THEN THEY FUCK.
Date: April 01 2014 12:24 PM Title: Prologue
Grrrr! I thought we were headed for an interesting moment between Sanders and Lutice's boobs. This being a prank, I suppose it could still happen. Looking forward to the REAL next chapter.
Date: March 21 2014 5:47 PM Title: Prologue
Im sorry papa dont whip me!!
Author's Response:
Well alright. I guess I can forgive you.
Date: March 21 2014 5:45 PM Title: Prologue
After all this time the weight and impact of your chapter 1 ending still hangs over this story. I guess it still bothers me that Isabella was killed and Sanders was betrayed by Aviel, whom was empowered with gigantic size for her betrayal. That any future encounter will be with them on opposite sides. Even though they were pretty well matched when they served on the same squad, Aviel demonstrated pretty well on Sanders the power she now had and how very little chance he had of of striking back at her.
These are things that were probably going through Sanders' mind as he struggled in your latest chapter. But it looks like you've thrown him a bone, a chance to begin to help turn the tables on the Society. And who knows, maybe even have Sanders and Aviel reconcile their friendship at distant point in the story. Keep up the good work!
Date: March 21 2014 5:25 PM Title: Prologue
This is the chapter ive been waiting for since act 2, took you long enough.
Author's Response:
Don't you get uppity with me, boy. You will get what you want when I DANE to give it to you. Be grateful you get anything at all.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2014 4:19 PM Title: Prologue
Brutal opening but it does go a ways to establish the Resistance as a threat, important since they often looked helpless against sword/shield in the first act. Still no sight of Saunders (dead or alive) which is probably the best way to keep us hooked. I will admit it will be a little weird if we’re following a complete new set of protagonists for awhile though.
Author's Response:
Indeed, the Resistance CAN be dangerous and I wanted to make that obvious from the start. They are a threat no matter how dismissive the Society is of them.
As for the new guys, well I hope they grow on you and it doesn't feel too weird to be following them
[Report This]Date: February 26 2014 2:15 PM Title: Prologue
Whoa! That was a bleak opener. :-(
Author's Response:
Just fair warning, this is going to be a rather bleak Act. There is a reason I picked Last of Us as a theme for this act.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2014 1:49 PM Title: Prologue
That was an awesome chapter! I'm really glad this story is back! It really goes to show just how high and mighty the giantess's think they are; they don't even take into consideration the fact that they can be killed too! I feel like if it were just tiny rangers, they wouldn't have fallen for the trap because they'd be on alert.
But those bumbling gts's feel too safe in their own massive skins and have too many fancy gadgets that they didn't use their own brains and fell for it! In all honesty, I was hoping to find out what happened to Sanders but I know your writting style, you love to draw out the cliffhangers as much as possible by switching to other perspectives or characters.
Oh well, I hope you get around to showing us what happened to him. Anyway, welcome back, I'm glad your starting the next part to this!
Author's Response:
Indeed, pride comes before the fall. And kill it with fire is always a good fall back option.
As for Sanders, well lets hope his luck hasn't run out yet.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2014 12:35 PM Title: Prologue
Welcome back. This is off to a good start. It'll be good to get a closer look at the Resistance, and to learn about some new Society characters.
Author's Response:
Thanks, but we won't be seeing much of the Society in this act. They had their turn in the lime light and now we are going to focus on the Resistance.
Date: February 26 2014 12:27 PM Title: Prologue
Oh My God
Ameazing
Extraordinary
It´s all english I know
[Report This]Date: February 26 2014 12:05 PM Title: Prologue
Yay you’re back!
So the Society is taking a more aggressive attitude toward the Resistance? Well that isn’t good, the swords had questionable practices before but now they might be given even less restrictions in how they do things. With the society probably stepping up its propaganda campaign it’s expected the citizens would want war. The Resistance might have unknowingly sparked that war by roasting those Society members.
Good starting chapter. Guess we'll be seeing things now through Resistance eyes.
Author's Response:
The war was already well on its way to happening. If anything, Darius, Derek, and co just speed up an inevitable problem.
And indeed, this Act will be focused around the Resistance.