[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 12: Seriously Dangerous
I kinda of want to see what happens with Greg and Ramona. Quick question, is she powerful enough to be a threat to the whole city if she goes hunting for the people who hurt her man?
As to Liana, someone tried to kill Jack and she just leaves him there after? I would have made a comment like, "well than you need to take better care of your things."
Author's Response:
A threat to the whole city?...maybe if she really lost it and just started murdering random people. I haven't completely fleshed out her abilities but a full power she could probably level a city block.
PPPFFFT! HAHAHA that was a pretty nice dig. XD I left it like that to setup something for the next chapter but maybe it's a little unbelievable. Oh well live and learn I guess.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 12: Seriously Dangerous
Haven't seen Mary and Emily in a while; I'm curious as to what they're doing since Mary evacuated her apartment. Also, Dave is cool: keep writing about that. Give Greg and Ramona a rest for now; I'm going to be honest, until very recently very little interesting has happened in their lives.
Author's Response:
I'll be touching base with them soon and maybe Greg and Ramona have been a little boring especially Greg who hadn't done anything until his chapter but that was the point of it.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 12: Seriously Dangerous
Oh Liana, you're like a bigger, meaner Ramona, and that only makes me more curious as to the warpath Ramona could very well go on in the wake of Greg's assault.
It was nice to check back in with Liana and Jack, and I think I like that their sections are a bit spaced out from one another. Gives a nice little sense of time passing.
As for who I'd like to check up on? Lord, that is...a tough question. I'd like to see what everyone is up to, honestly, though I have to admit a bias toward Tyler/Rain and Greg/Ramona.
Author's Response:
You know you have an uncanny habit of somehow guessing what I've have planned for following chapters....am I that predictable?...I'm not saying anymore then that...You've probably already solved the mystery of Steven Rotmer..smarty pants.
Date: April 25 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 12: Seriously Dangerous
Liana is one intimidating woman. And she goes from playfully mean, to loving, to murderous in the blink of an eye! I wonder how she would have felt it Jack had gotten hurt or killed due to her antics, intead of some third party?
Like if he would have missed the jump to the potted plant and landed with a splat down below, all because she wouldn't help him use the restroom? She seems to care for him, but I don't think she's the type of person to place blame on herself.
Author's Response:
Yeah she'd probably be more pissed that he hurt himself because he couldn't hold it and didn't have the guts to upset her by wetting the bed. At the same time I'm pretty sure he was in no real danger there was probably a pillow down there or something. I don't know I only write the story.