[Report This]Date: April 24 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: Plight of the Common Man Part 2
I feel bad for Greg but yeah taking a grand in cash out of the bank at night is stupid in the real world much less a world where just about everyone has super powers. He’s lucky he’s not dead. Though I wonder how Ramona’s going to react to her boyfriend being assaulted, especially if she finds out he got assaulted trying to buy her something.
Author's Response:
Poorly. She will react very VERY poorly......be afraid.
Date: April 24 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 11: Plight of the Common Man Part 2
Neat chapter, good on you for exploring new types of scenes in this world. It was interesting to see that just because someone elevates doesn't mean that their life doesn't still suck.
I'll be curious to see how this affects Greg's life. Whether the trauma causes him to become further dependent on Ramona, or if it (along with his small success in the fight) inspires his growing independence.
Also a neat look into the way business is done in the New World.
Author's Response:
You bring up an interesting point with Greg's reaction to this. It's kind of a coin flip right now.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Plight of the Common Man Part 2
Oh, Ramona is not going to be a happy person, is she?
Another good chapter. Greg's boss ultimately ended up being a bit...nicer, than I expected her to be, and it was pleasing to see that she isn't without empathy.
But seriously though, I was hoping for more reasons for Ramona to flex her muscle and this might just provide it. Poor Greg, though.
Author's Response:
Yeah well Greg should've known better. I mean trying to propose! No way I' m letting a normal be that happy without working for it. Ramona told him it was dangerous for a normal. Maybe he'll listen next time....ppfft :p