[Report This]Date: April 16 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Plight of the Common Man Part 1
I continue to hate Barabara. Please do something to fight this, Amy :(
Not too much else to say, since this is only a part 1. Greg and Ramona's morning-time antics continue to amuse...and was that Megan, by chance?
That said...
> (I'd recommend looking at the tags in particular one I haven't used yet.)
...son of a bitch, I didn't even notice that one. I...don't know if I'll laugh or cry if poor Tyler ends up elevating only for him to be the cause of that tag. Regardless, eagerly looking forward to more, as usual.
Author's Response:
Barbara's a bitch but this isn't over.
Yes that was Megan. I knew Greg would have an interaction with a class 2 and Megan just fit. Fun Fact: Her morning jogs span the entire city.
Now see you've just given me the darkest inspiration....I don't want to but..DAMN!....I-I have a lot to think about.
[Report This]Date: April 15 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Plight of the Common Man Part 1
I just recently started reading this story. So far it's quite good. I do like that in several cases the characters have good underlying reasons for their behaviour. For example Sheila terrorizing Tyler because she thinks it's in his own best interest. Also doing it not out of malice, but more of trying to protect him when she's not around and also she's doing the teenage equivalent of a boy pulling on a girl's pig tails. What I'm saying is it's very interesting to see a multi-faceted character that's motivation is more than self-gratification.
I'm also interested to see how the Dave/Barbara/Amanda triangle plays out, especially as it's likely two of those three might see the third as a cold and cruel character whom only came back now that Amanda might be worth having as a daughter. (I'm assuming Barabra didn't see her daughter much between her elevation, and her daughter's, if at all.) Makes you wonder what Barbara's been up to in that time.
Author's Response:
It's always nice to have new readers and hey! You even decided to comment so that's double nice. Dave/Amanda/Barbara is a very complicated relationship but I can say it doesn't end here.
[Report This]Date: April 15 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Plight of the Common Man Part 1
I just recently started reading this story. So far it's quite good. I do like that in several cases the characters have good underlying reasons for their behaviour. For example Sheila terrorizing Tyler because she thinks it's in his own best interest. Also doing it not out of malice, but more of trying to protect him when she's not around and also she's doing the teenage equivalent of a boy pulling on a girl's pig tails. What I'm saying is it's very interesting to see a multi-faceted character that's motivation is more than self-gratification.
I'm also interested to see how the Dave/Barbara/Amanda triangle plays out, especially as it's likely two of those three might see the third as a cold and cruel character whom only came back now that Amanda might be worth having as a daughter. (I'm assuming Barabra didn't see her daughter much between her elevation, and her daughter's, if at all.) Makes you wonder what Barbara's been up to in that time.
Date: April 15 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 10: Plight of the Common Man Part 1
Happy to check in with Greg. He seems to be doing a good job adjusting his masculinity in the New World and mostly living a good life. I'm curious how his relationship with a class 3 might differ from Tyler & Rain.