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Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These

Class 3, Tyler needs a break, im honestly surprized hes not totally depressed in his life.  A lover who is semi-all-powerful would help that i think(and not to mention probably super hot after an elevation).  That and Sheila needs to be made to feel as helpless as she picks on the normal people.

I love and at the same time hate the feelings i get reading parts of this story told by normals.  You evoke this feeling of helplessness in a world that is suddenly too big for them.  I really hope each of the normals winds up with a happy eneding, hopefully tyler's involves a 30~ish foot Rain who's a class 3 elevated and that people stop picking on him. (and so we can get a sexy gentle size related chapter later? I cant imagine he'd be opposed to being smothered effectionatley with giant boobs :P)

 



Author's Response:

It looks like class 3 is winning for the moment so you might just get your wish although I don't think Rains gonna reach anywhere near 30 feet unless Class 2 does a come from behind. Thanks for the comment.....and Sheila's not that bad just misunderstood....Like Walter!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These

Fun surprise, I was looking forward to a new chapter.  This was a fun dynamic, and as always I love the way your chapters have specific scenes/stories to tell.

I'm most interested in the super people you've introduced, such as Ramona from Chapter 2, so I'll vote for Rain becoming a high powered normal sized level 1.  

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These

3 mostly because Tyler's surrounded by enough 2s already.



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Class 3

Reviewer: Ackbar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These

Oh, I was wondering if we'd get the chance to see someone elevate, and this is a wonderful situation for it.

As tempting as voting for Class 3 is just due to curiosity over what sort of abilities you have in mind, I don't feel I can deny poor Tyler the opportunity to look up at yet another woman in his life. So Class 2 it is.

 

Outside of that, great to see another update on this. Every day I hope for one. You have a wonderful little work going on here.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you that means a lot considering I look forward to you updating your stories especially Omega.

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