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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: What Defines Them

Wow you said this chapter would be boring dialogue. It seem to have plenty of drama to be a good chapter. But since the next chapter will have chainsaw nunchuk wielding sumo ninjas, and some. I can't wait.

Author's Response:

If I can find a way to add chainsaw nunchuk wielding sumo ninjas without it being completely ridiculous I will! Until then I recommend Dr. McNinja the webcomic I stole that joke from. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: What Defines Them

Jackson got problems either way, maybe after a few attempts on his life he will see the benefits of having a giantess for a wife when she swats his attackers aside with ease. Also, that might bring them closer together.



Author's Response:

That's the idea.

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