[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 3: The View from Below
Emily is a bit mean but I still like her. She’s realistic. Very sweet that she would let Mary (you misspelled that) live with her.
I find it strange however that normals are in the minority. I feel like it would be better if they were still the majority in terms of number. Just an opinion.
Author's Response:
It's a transition period right now there are still lots of normal but we're focusing on specific normal people who have many elevated around them. Rain is the first to elevate in her family and Dave lives in a primarly normal nieghborhood. Unfortunately elevation is inherited genetically so kids born after thier parents elevate are born elevated. Greg's parents are trying right now wish them luck!
Date: February 20 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 3: The View from Below
Great chapter.
My only criticism is that I'm unclear on physically what is happening in some of the scenes, how the characters are geographically located.
Really fun dynamics though, I very much enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
I think I get what your saying. The problem is once you fully commit to specific location or words like "Earth" you've locked yourself in to those perameters. Then you have to ask questions like if this is Earth. Is Obama still president? Is Rihanna an elevated being? These are good, fun questions just not ones I feel like answering. Thank you for the comment. You've actually given me a lot to think about. For now let's say it's a world similair to Earth but the names of places and locations are different.....Or am I totally wrong and your just confused about whether a character is to the left or right of another character.