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Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2014 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 2: New

Wow, how did I miss this story? How do people get elevated? The first chapter was a bit suspicious. Anytime I read something like:

'She knew in an instant. She was in love.'

I raise an eyebrow...seems contrived, too fast. Then again, I've been guilty of that.

However I loved the second chapter. I really hope to see more of Ramona!



Author's Response:

I going to adress how elevation happens in a side story, here's a hint Sammy took a field trip in this story to a very interesting place. She's less in love with him and more with what he can give her. Liana is not a good person, she did kill a guy.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: New

Great chapter, I love the dynamic and am curious about this world.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2: New

Oh I thought you were going to continue the first chapter, so this is like an anthology?

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