Date: March 27 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Okay I'll add some clarity.
Class 1: Physical mutations: wings, extra arms, modest size increase under twenty feet. glow in the dark hair
Class 2: Giant or Giantess it's that simple for now anyway.
Class 3: Crazy mystery superpower nonsense like invisible rapist hollow man or super fast thief convict. Or incredibly clingy flying super girlfriend.
Hope this helps :)
[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Class 3, but still grows to the now "average" 15 feet. We don't want to destroy all of Rain's dreams now do we?
Author's Response:
Hmmm. interesting.
Date: March 27 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Class 3 if Rain can be made into a giantess. If not then Class 2.
Author's Response:
Yeah I plan on exploring more class 3 non sense in the upcoming Sanders Siblings chapter but in my mind they'd never break thirty feet.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
This story mixes the subtle (or not so subtle, sometimes), superiority of the women and elevated men with true emotions in a way most authors don't seem to be able to accomplish. In this vein, it shares a lot in common with some of the best stories on this board. This chapter continues the tradition. Wonderful!
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Thank you for your comment, rating, and support.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Liana doesn't fuck around does she? She is brutally honest and uses all forms of intimidation to get what she wants. It's sexy, I like it. I think the fact that she hasn't physically harmed him goes a long way. It's much more interesting for her to intimidate, reason with, or even seduce Jackson. KUDOS, i'm loving this story!
Author's Response:
Liana is a master of many forms of manipulation and she is unashamed in using them to control her tiny hubbie.
Date: February 23 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Interesting story, please continue
Author's Response:
Continue I shall!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Forgot to add a rating!
Date: February 21 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
I was wondering about that Emily/Erica change, I decided that they were different characters since Mary seemed so much more comfortable vocalizing her complaints here. Still works great, and I love the idea that Emily stuffs Mary into her cleavage when she doesn't need her.
Author's Response:
Thanks you again! As far as Mary is concerned the idea is she's not exactly "on the clock" so is more okay speaking out of term.
Date: February 20 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
I more meant in chapter 3 I was unclear on where the large & small character were located in relation to each other. If Mary was on the ground looking up to Emily, or if Mary was on a raised plane putting them equal elevation.
Author's Response:
OH. I thought I'd made it clear that Mary for the most part was on a end table so she was maybe waist high to Emily. The door she left though is cut into the wall the table is pressed against. It was specifically installed for Mary's use. You'll see more interesting retrofits in later chapters The idea is that the world is in a transitional period and a lot of architecture is being retrofitted to accomdiate the new significantly larger populous.
Date: February 19 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Don't stop now! By all means keep going. This story is interesting. I want to see more about the changed world!
I wonder how one deals with having a suddenly giant daughter or younger sibling? Especially if they were children. That would make for some interesting relationship changes.
Author's Response:
Don't worry there is more. Thanks for the interesting idea. Ithink I'll explore that eventually too.
Date: February 18 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Out of what, jail?
Author's Response:
Don't tell anyone, but yeah he was totally in fricken jail.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Interesting way to describe love.
Author's Response:
There going to have a rather unconventional relationship.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
hmm, interesting. I look forward to learning more about this "new world"
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
So does she really love him or is she saying she is in love because she can control him and his money? I have a similar idea but a more light hearted tale but with my story taking up all of my writing time now, that story would not happen for a long time.
It seems promising so I look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response:
This is going to be and interesting relationship. Especially from Liana and how she views Jack as a nomral husband. She loves him just not how you might exspect.