Date: February 18 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! We have some new victims joining the fray!
Date: February 17 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Haha, You bet I cant wait! Especially when I am witnessing this relationship grow stronger every chapter. It will only be a matter of time until I see Diane confidently put him there. She could also show him how to pleasure a mature woman. I cant wait!
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like Carlys starting to have regrets and guilt about what shes done to Bobby. Thats good, because she deserves it. You dont really know the value of something till its gone...
Despite no gts content, this was a good, non sexy, character development chapter...I think we can all appreachiate that!
Author's Response:
Yes, Carly thinks that her husband Bob might have been killed, and she's really feeling bad. She's blaming herself completely, because her sister Jenn doesn't really seem to be too concerned about him anymore, and that has forced her to reconcider everything...
Yeah, I'm trying to get better at character development, although it might not seem that way, as I sometimes like to introduce a new character by thrusting them right into the action first... then, sometime later, unveiling who they really are. Hopefully making it more interesting and mysterious.
Thanks Gadgetmawombo, I'm Glad you can 'appreciate' that.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Once again another great chapter. Not many tags in this story, so I didnt find this story immediately.
First of all, the the descriptive sentence of Diane was fantastic. As well as your use of the setting. Waking up early morning, and then saying it was dark outside; At first, I thought I misread something, but you actually had me thinking that at early morning, there were still stars out. I enjoyed that mini puzzle even though it was unintentional.
Also, is the main character, Bob, Bobby, Rob, Robert? or are they the same, becuase I hear a mix.
One thing that felt awkward as I was reading was wondering how Bob was able to see the mail box name while his body is moving rapidly up and down with Diane's hand?
Lastly, I am curious, why the hand? Usually its not the hand which carries a tiny during a jog. Its not that sexy in my opinion, and I feel that a jog/walk would eventually heat up and gradually open that hand to let in air. I dont mean to be rude, but of all the other places, why the hand?
Anyway, I wonder how Chloe and Jennifer handle their tinies which seems like they may pick up from the bar. Now here is a twist. If multiple shrunken men appear in the same scene, what if Bob gets accidently switched and Diane has no idea! Or Carly finds Bob, ties him up, then another tiny finds Bob, Bob then ties that tiny up to save his own skin, and Carly has fun with the tiny she still thinks is Bob.
Lots of possibilities my friend, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Diane occasionally calls Bobby 'Robert', (as that is actually his name)- Bob is short for Robert. ) Bob isn't small enough to fit completely inside a womans fist. He's six inches tall, so Diane was just securely holding his legs as she carried him along with her on her early morning walk. She wasn't 'rapidly' pumping her hand up and down, only slightly- as she was walking. Diane's very careful with her tiny son-in-law, but even just the slightest motion while riding inside her hand would make someone 'So small', feel like they were floating up and down...
Yes, there's several possibilitys! This story is could take any direction at this point. '*-_-*' no spoilers though.... (heh, heh, heh)
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Uh-oh! Three giantesses, with access to a shrinking potion, going to drown their sorrows with booze? I pity the bar-hopping horn dog who tries to talk them into a foursome. Speaking of dogs; that yoga scene with Yankee's owner...?
BOW-WOW-WOW! YIPPY-YI! YIPPY-YAY!
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, Diane's been trying to whip the 'kinks' out of her little buddy, and she can be pretty persuasive too! By the time she done with him, he'll be as loyal as her toy poodle ;)
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, wonder how hard it would really be to hang onto a waist band for that long. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Spooky! Yeah, I'd like to find out, too! ;)
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Carly is just getting a bit of Karma for how she treated her husband...because in my opinion, besides the youngest,, shes prolly treated him the worst outta all the women so far. So him running away is completely justified, plus Dianes been a sweetheart to him the entire time! I eagerly await what you have planned in this one!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadgetmawombo! Diane has appeared to be her tiny son-law's savour, thus far, although, she may just have an entirely different agenda...
The next few chapters will focus more on Chloe and Jennifer though , but we'll return to tiny Bobby around chap. 4 , so get ready for some twists and turns my friend!