[Report This]Date: August 09 2018 3:13 PM Title: 1st chance
All your stories are gold, sir, and you know that. And as I saw even the great Mr E had submitted his praise, I suppose I have no choice.
This story in particular... That dialogue, that ending, that realization and fulfillment. There is something that speaks to us all. The mischief, the tenderness, that deep aggression, but still, that humaneness.
There is deep beauty in this story of yours. A young man with promise of life forgoes that all to service his love. A majestic donation. And even death is impotent.
Author's Response:
Makes me happy to read your review. thank you very much.
Date: September 01 2014 4:19 PM Title: 1st chance
Loved this one! It was great that he eneded up being her foot slave after all. Would love to be him! :D
Date: June 23 2014 6:37 AM Title: 1st chance
This is by far the best story on this site, I have enjoyed it so much! You are planning on finishing it, right?
Author's Response:
Yes, last chapter is up.
It's finished now I hope you like the ending.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2014 2:08 PM Title: 1st chance
Great story! i love how you write in 3rd person and him dying and coming back to life is a cool aspect too. the grammar could use a little touching up but nothing too major.
Date: March 05 2014 10:18 PM Title: 1st chance
So...he will become a foot-slave, or go the heaven...sounds like a win win...
[Report This]Date: January 29 2014 3:53 PM Title: 1st chance
I love where this is going. Unaware, feet, and a story that is interesting. Please continue writing this.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
I'm already writing the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2014 9:10 PM Title: 1st chance
Great set up! I'd really like to see more of this tale! ;`)
Date: January 22 2014 1:54 PM Title: 1st chance
Good so far and holds a lot of promise! Please continue with this story :)