[Report This]Date: June 15 2015 7:24 AM Title: Return
Another break-through? I hope so!
As for Melody's little white lie? I'm glad she respected Corey's privacy. It's one thing to get back in the saddle if you fall off the horse through your own clumsiness. But, if the horse THREW you off, and then tried to stomp the life out of you?! That's going to make ANYBODY a pedestrian (emotionally, as well as physically) for quite a long time!
Author's Response:
We'll see :3
And you're quite right in that regard. Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2015 10:24 PM Title: Return
Interesting how Melody lied to Claire about Corey not wanting to go to the party. Now she's getting blamed for "forgetting."
Author's Response:
Heh. Well, one can't say Melody isn't willing to sacrifice!
Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2015 8:22 PM Title: Return
Awesome to this return to the main three so to speak, great stuff.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting!
Date: June 14 2015 7:24 PM Title: Return
I like how everything seems to be converging toward this party now, with the various prior threads of the story all at least being touched on tangentially with this chapter. Normally I turn my nose up a little at Jenna but I kinda love that little gesture where she holds her finger over Naomi's face. Also interesting to hear mention of her emotional difficulties, which I was not expecting to see come up; still crossing my fingers that that thread gets tugged a little more down the line. I was glad too that we got to see Claire reacting to Corey's absence, as I'd been curious if she'd just let such a thing drop. Judging by how suspicious she appeared that Melody would goof something up, I assume the matter isn't closed for her. I am very very curious to see if that's a conflict you choose to play with at some point. Finally it was nice to see Naomi coming back into contact with Steph after all the turmoil. A sweet little cliffhanger end there.