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Reviewer: Cain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2015 1:19 PM Title: Retreat - Part 2

Awesome Chapter! Poor Corey...and Meldoy for that matter! Sits and waits for another awesome chapter. *Sits*



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Well you didn't have to sit too long :). Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 10:45 PM Title: Retreat - Part 2

Amazing chapter, it sure was a lot to take in. I feel like I understand what happened at the end. But I also feel like I don't understand what happened at the end.

Oh man I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. Hopefully I can provide the next chapter in a timely manner :)

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 9:17 PM Title: Retreat - Part 2

Case book PTSD behavior. Poor Corey.



Author's Response:

Indeed :(. Though I'm glad my depiction here came through as such a thing. Thanks for comment!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 5:24 PM Title: Retreat - Part 2

So, let me get this striaght. He's neither growing nor shrinking. He merely interfered with his bacta treatments (if you'll excuse the SW reference) partly to shower with Melody. And, partly, to have a semi-legit excuse not to go to the party (due to still-sensitive bones).

Author's Response:

Precisely!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 5:19 PM Title: Retreat - Part 2

That was a heavy chapter, we do get to see some more of Corey's mind, and how it's changed due to the trauma of his accident. I quite enjoyed the interactions this chapter, and the reveal of what Corey had done, I suppose I thought it might be more serious, but I'm glad it wasn't; for this chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you enjoyed this peek into his psyche. Thank you for commenting!

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