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Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 3:32 PM Title: Pickups - Part 3

Wait. How does Howard know about Stephanie's backstory? How about Enforcer-Patient Confidentiality? What's Howard's status among those in Aegis?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 1:54 PM Title: Pickups - Part 3

A sweet little story-arc.

 

I wasn't expecting/had forgotten about Stephanie tagging along so that was an interesting surprise. That said we haven't seen Marion in awhile thus it makes me curious how she is progressing given Stephanie and Naomi's progress over the chapters.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 11:41 AM Title: Pickups - Part 3

I loved this set of chapters. It really goes to show that this mountain called Clair really does consider her adoptive father as a real dad! Its weird coming from so many other stories on this site where daughters hurt, torture and even kill their tiny fathers to a daughter lovingly respecting someone the size of a dust mite. And that girly, childlike way she acted when her dad suggested going on a little adventure of  their own was so cute and definitely my favorite part of the chapter!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 11:05 AM Title: Pickups - Part 3

Pretty good. I'd been wanting to see more of the family. It's pretty fun.

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