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Reviewer: SmallLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 4:18 AM Title: Pickups - Part 2

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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 11:54 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

Awe a cherished moment. I really love the chapter with Cory and his family, or Melody.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 6:20 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

A heartwarming chapter

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 2:05 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

Very sweet and descriptive chapter. Can't wait to see more.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 12:45 PM Title: Pickups - Part 2

I can tell you had fun writing this chapter. Awesome work. 

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 11:45 AM Title: Pickups - Part 2

Really sweet chapter! And it definitely puts the sheer scale and power between Betas and Omegas into perspective...Its really crazy how much precision Claire has: one muscle spasm, one tiny slipup and her dear adoptive father would be mushed into her cheek with that little display of affection..

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