Date: September 15 2015 3:38 AM Title: Sisters - Part 1
Oh my god why did you have to inflict such happy memories on me you make me cry :( really good writing great story again why u do this to meeee
Date: June 03 2014 3:13 PM Title: Sisters - Part 1
Well now I sympathize with Stephanie even more. Claire and her have a lot in common. In some ways they even mirror each other. Hopefully Claire can use that to start repairing some of the damage Marion inflicted.
Also I'm starting to hate Marion a little. Is there any chance for redemption for her?.... The answer's no isn't it?
[Report This]Date: June 02 2014 5:38 PM Title: Sisters - Part 1
This was a very well written character moment. The story is an excellent counterpoint to his fate, and the end of the chapter did a good job of describing her thoughts.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2014 4:12 PM Title: Sisters - Part 1
I admit I blanked on who Steph was at first but once the recollection came to me from the jump to reality it made the chapter all the more great/emotionial tugging for lack of a term that escapes me.
Still story(stories?) of the year in my book.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2014 7:53 AM Title: Sisters - Part 1
There will be much sobbing and heart wrenching when that icey shell finally cracks.
Author's Response:
Probably ;_;
[Report This]Date: June 02 2014 7:30 AM Title: Sisters - Part 1
That was a nice chapter. It shows that Stephanie did care about her little brother, and that's probably why she suppreses her memories and feelings about him. I can't wait for the family gathering in the evening. Can't wait to see if Mom and Dad pay the prisoners a visit, and what if "Auntie" decides to pay a visit?
Author's Response:
Marion should probably hope she doesn't :P
Thanks for reading.
Date: June 02 2014 4:39 AM Title: Sisters - Part 1
I swear I expected gruesome twist to the end of that flashback where kid Stephanie finds the mangled corpse of her brother again. The ending, however, was still just as depressing. Damn.
And now I hate Marion all over again.
I see the only real change to Stephanie now is that Claire at some point gave her a beta sized doll. I already said it on the chat but I’d rather see more scenes with Stephanie as she arguably the one with the saddest backstory and the realest of issues.
Author's Response:
Hahah, I was wondering if some people would think that was where this was heading. I'm glad I could deliver a gut punch from an entirely different direction :)
It's actually a bit more than a doll, but we'll see that next time we check in on her. And yeah, I'll admit to some...frustrations on my end, because I'd love to just focus on Stephanie for a long time but I have other characters to get to as well.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2014 3:58 AM Title: Sisters - Part 1
All right! I love this chapter!!! This is what I paid for! I can't wait to see what happens with Stephanie and Claire this time. Although, judging by what her thoughts are, she hasn't progressed much emotionally in a month. I'm not entirely sure. Does she see Betas as objects normally?
Author's Response:
As Nostory said, it's that she doesn't want to view them as actual people so that she can avoid her pain.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2014 3:42 AM Title: Sisters - Part 1
Well that was heartbreaking way to start the day.
'I'll always find you' Christ.
Author's Response:
I'm glad I could ruin your morning :)
[Report This]Date: June 02 2014 3:07 AM Title: Sisters - Part 1
That only makes the accident even worse because of what happened the one time she didn't find him. Difficult road ahead for her.