[Report This]Date: May 24 2014 7:15 PM Title: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt.2
The discriptions were very clearly, well thought out; intensified, and extremely vile. In this scene, an entrapped group of victims are eaten alive... one at a time!
Damn... I'll bet the 'vore-lovers' are sweating for this one...
Great work, but, I had to speed read through this... I'm not into the 'Vore' stuff.
-I think you've been studying Tinyone's work too much... ;`)
Author's Response:
I'm not studing tinyone's work *closes link to tinyones profile*
I tried to add a little bit for everyone, but your right this was a vore intense chapter. As time goes on I'll probably get a little more diverse in my methods.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 11:14 PM Title: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt.2
I'm not a fan of the gruesome nature of the killings but you don't seem to have lost a step at all. Glad to see this story again.
aaron
Author's Response:
I am starting to genuinely believe that I went too far with the detail this chapter. Anyways I'm glad to see my writing hasn't declined in quality. Thanks for the review Aaron, you've given me a lot to think about.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 9:34 PM Title: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt.2
If most of them die then she's not actually the warden of anything anymore unless you plan on shrinking more prisons accidentally around our heroine.
Though I am curious what became of the guards/non inmate workers etc.
Author's Response:
The amount of people that have died thus far is relatively small compared to the number of people left. There are still thousands left. :)
As for the non-criminals. In the most violent parts of the prison, I stated that most of the guards died in the prison riot. As for the doctors, prison psychologists, janitors, electrictians, etc etc; almost all of them are likely to still be alive. There is no particular animosity towards any of them, in fact since these people actual helped make life in the prison livable for them, it is likely that they were protected from the more violent prisoners.
And if your wondering about Cynthia. She only targets criminals, particularly rapists so there is no chance of any guards dying at her hands.