Reviews For Maria's Prison
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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 5:47 PM Title: Her own little world

Gerome, you were wrong buddy! She is a monster, and it looks like you were fucked to death or knocked unconcious..either way it doesnt look like Chelsea cares..

I gotta say, I really like the concept of this story...The idea of the prison in the closet instead of the little city mixes things up and allows the gts to be evil without it being as bad as if she was evil to a micro city of innocents.

Great concept and I like how some characters are slowly being corrupted by the power they have over tinies or because they are put in situations where their own well being is in jeopardy.



Author's Response:

Sorry about the late response. I usually don't check my stories reviews until after I've posted the next chapter.

 

I tried to not go for the typical sadistic giantess in this story. Nothing makes me face palm more than when a giantess has no legitimate reason to be cruel. As for the corruption, all I have to say is... the stronger the convictions, the more violent they are when they finally snap.

See you next chapter Gadget

 

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 10:33 PM Title: Her own little world

Come on Gerome, don't even try to get away. As I find myself saying frequently

GG, Well Played



Author's Response:

hehe, the tinies don't really stand much of a chance do they.

At the very least Gerome made a good effort.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2014 1:40 AM Title: Her own little world

At least she had fun.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, everyone will have fun soon. Well... except for the tinies, they kind of get screwed.

 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 8:34 PM Title: Her own little world

Another tantilizing episode, A.W.!   Gerome's hunger leading him right into the clutches of the buzzed-up Chelsea...  Somehow I hope he survives though.  His nose, rib's and arm all broken... but, he's a pretty resilient lil' dude!  The L.S.D. trip was pretty discriptive, too.  especially her faltering reality, as she compares her fantasy world to the actual real life world!  Great detail!  Expertly described.

She did climax nearly as quick as she felt his tiny body, so maybe he wasn't drownd within her soggy gusset?  Oh well, there is plenty more left to go, practically an endless suppley!  ;`)  Lovin' this tale, Dude!

P.S. You might have to drop the 'Amateur' part of your penname...

 



Author's Response:

I'm so relieved to hear that the LSD scene worked out, I was unsure if I had gone a little too surreal. Now about Gerome, I'd hate to spoil this, but he is not dead. If he ends up dying, it will be because of Maria.

I've grown rather fond of the 'Amatuer' part of my name lol. However, now that you mention it, I could use a more appropriate name. Tinyone234 once told me to change my name to 'Adept Wordsmith', so maybe I'll do that. 

First I have to figure out how to change my name though.

 

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