Date: January 14 2014 11:36 AM Title: From One Cell to Another
Oh man, cynthia is a great character. I can sense many good evil gts scenes coming from her, nice work! Maybe she'll have to snuff out a prison break:)
Author's Response:
The idea of a prison break never occured to me. I may just have to try that now.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2014 1:28 PM Title: From One Cell to Another
To begin with, I have to say, that this is actually the first time I've read anything of yours... This caught my attention, as I quickly scanned the warnings that you placed in the summary. Ha! 'thoughtfull technique'...
The Idea was a little bit radical, (as in overly unbelievable) Shrinking an entire Prison?
Curiousity, lead me on and I got completely caught up in this story! Your spelling and writing skills are nearly excellent, and the discriptions are very well done.
I thought the Idea of having some of the toughest, meanest, bastards possible as these college girl's victim's was a brilliant contrast of power!
I'm really excited about this story, and look forward to the following chapters!
Just one question though, will the mystery of the shrinking prison ever be revealed, at anytime during the story, or will that be something that will lead us into another story that will eventually follow?
Great stuff! ;`)
Author's Response:
Well It seems I've made quite the first impression. I'm actually a little nervous in writing this response. :)
The idea for this story just came to me one day as I was watching a crime documentary. I thought to myself, "you know what death row needs... a giantess" and BAM then it hit me. The power of contrast that you mentioned is what I personally love as well; these guys are the baddest of the bad, true psychopaths, and now they are at the mercy of a couple of stressed out college girls.
In response to your question, I will have to go with a maybe. I may turn it into another story, or just leave it unspoken. Frankly I'm unsure at this point.
Anyways, thanks for giving my stories a try Wildcatman I hope you stick around.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2014 7:10 PM Title: From One Cell to Another
A solid not unexpected turn of bloodlust.
I do however commend you giving the typical blonde bubbly sorority girl such a heartwrenching backstory...then turn her into a stone cold killer.
Well played.
Author's Response:
Gotta love the classics with a little twist you know.
Anywways, I decided to give Cynthia a realistic motivation to go on a killing spree and not just because this is a sadistic story.
Its a little exaggerate, but I feel like it works in this case.
Thanks for reviewing again AdamX