Reviews For The Perfect Woman
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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 8:35 AM Title: Fun time

Yes, pretty good writing seeing the experience from both perspectives.

Need a little more description of feelings, smells, sounds, tastes, etc.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 11:54 AM Title: Fun time

Excellent transitions from boobs to insertion to ass. Very smooth writing and entertaining.

You also have great cliff hangers.

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 6:08 PM Title: The Meeting

I am glad you are writing it is always nice to see new writers as always work on improving (: 

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 7:53 AM Title: Man's Best Friend

This is a nice start.  You do a good job of keeping the unaware angle light and playful.  There are some spelling/grammar mistakes around that might be worth cleaning up, and sometimes the verb tenses don't match up, but overall this is a decent way to jump into your tale.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'll keep that in mind as I go forward and try to improve!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 6:59 PM Title: The Meeting

Really good story so far... Keep going!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I appreciate it! Love the username btw!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 3:10 PM Title: The Meeting

This looks really promising, especially the tags Insertion, Toilet, Unaware and Butt, in combination of size micro though I had liked nano much more (for example 1/8"). Keep writing, you have proper spelling, grammer, and text flow.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll have to consider nano for next time!

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 11:20 AM Title: The Meeting

Not bad for a first story has small details that could be improved on.but we pick those up as  as we go I would like to see more (:



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I appreciate it! More to come!

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