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Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Whoa, every nerve in my body has been frazzled after reading all 5 chapters...

So much debauchery and wickedness, the exquisite details are poured out like a steaming bucket of blood and guts.  It was nice of you to apologize before hand for the little rape scene, but I cannot figure out why?    It was fantastic!

Very realistically discribed, I love the way you write, although I don't care for the large blocks of squished-up text... (Kind of, hard on the eyes)

But, I'm not complaining, this is GREAT!

 

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