Date: December 30 2013 6:23 PM Title: Pissing the summer away
I am really liking where this is going you can really make a build up. I can't wait to see where you take this next. But I would like to know if this will remain completely unaware and will it have a bare skin but crush?
Date: December 29 2013 12:55 PM Title: Pissing the summer away
karma looks like it 's going to hit him hard. I hope theres some gts material in here, but if not, good luck
Date: December 23 2013 3:53 AM Title: Pissing the summer away
Can I assume that there's going to be GTS material at some point? You mentioned that virtually every GTS worthy person is not around (I hope you're not thinking the old woman counts). Otherwise this would be just like the number of kiddie bug movies that have been released in the last decade or so. Other then those things, the story is interesting enough for me to keep reading.
Author's Response:
No, it's going to follow that other movie trope: a teeenager having the place to himself and people returning unexpectedly. :)