[Report This]Date: March 22 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Very glad to see you writing again! There's a thin line between brave and stupid, and Vincent is right on it, isn't he?
Author's Response:
It's good to be writing again! Vincent is...well, he's learning. Sometimes ignorance looks a lot like courage!
Date: March 19 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Darn it, Sketch took my Batcave joke!
Good to see this story back. I look forward to learning what Vincent has discovered. Nice display of his powers in this chapter. It's fascinating that someone so small and vulnerable is also quite powerful in his own right.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pixis! One of the purposes of this chapter was to help me flesh out and put on paper all that Vincent is able to do--so far! This was helpful for me, as well as a reminder to readers. More powers will come in time...
[Report This]Date: March 19 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sounds like Vincent just discovered the Bat Cave.
Good to see you continue this story. Sorry I haven't left a review before now. I'd actually fallen a couple chapters behind when you took your break. It's an excellent sequel, and I'm glad to see more of Vincent, Susanna, and now Rebecca.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've been rolling around ideas for this idea for several months. Sometimes the best thing to do is just write with an idea in mind and see what happens. That's kind of what I'm doing right now!
I'm hoping to write a chapter a week. If I write more, I'll still only post one a week. This will give people opportunities to stay caught up.