Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

Excellent chapter, one of the better vore scenes I've read. Too many writers have things happen quickly and don't take the time to describe the details. You did a good job describing Vincent's adventure and surroundings. I liked that the few seconds in Rebecca's mouth seemed to stretch with many thoughts crossing Vincent's mind at once. And the gale force winds of her snoring were a great image.