[Report This]Date: January 21 2014 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 16: For All the World to See
Love this chapter. Love to see Maggie breaking out in her own way. Hope to see more of her and her "gentle" play. Even thought this story is almost finished, I still see a bad time for Scott ahead. Love this series. On critisim I just wished I saw more play from Maggie. Like foot/ass torture or other types of mean behavior. I hope you write on that behaviour in the future. For grammar/spelling I couldn't see mistakes. I see another classic in your future.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! Scott does indeed have some rough times ahead. As I told another reviewer, this story has mostly been a set-up for Scott's house arrest, which will continue in however-many-more-of-these-I-make; now that it's firmly established, the 6th story will get a bit raunchier, including more footplay and probably some butt interaction as well.
Date: January 19 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 16: For All the World to See
If it were me, I'd probably be on the verge of insanity. Or suicide. Or something... if he had ever been thinking of changing his mind and going to jail, he's just lost that option -- and that's just one of many, many consequences that came into my mind (after just a couple of days!), picked basically at random.
Luckily for us, I'm not him :)
PS
I've probably already written this, but given that I feared that there wouldn't be a fifth installment, your reply to dudeduderson2000's comment is greaaaaaat news!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. As dark a notion as it is, those ideas of Scott's mental state have crossed my mind too, but rest assured he'll have a new lease on life before this story is up. And there definitely will be a 6th part, though when it comes out is anyone's guess (including mine).
[Report This]Date: January 19 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 16: For All the World to See
Scott finally getting it might save his sanity...not his humanity mind you but it will make his days a bit easier.
Author's Response:
It just might, providing he can learn to do what he's told. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 18 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 16: For All the World to See
Only one more chapter!?! He hasn't nearly been underfoot enough yet, hope to see a part 6 someday.
Author's Response:
This story was mostly a set-up for Scott's new life being imprisoned at home, but now that it's almost over, it's probably fair to guess the foot action will be heavier in the 6th part.