[Report This]Date: January 16 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 15: Extreme Makeover, Shrunken Brother Edition
Excellent chapter!! I'm looking forward to more of those "Memories of Nancy/judy bathing him" scenes in future installments.
Speaking of Nancy, her ability to "exploit Scott and sexually degrade him" could have potential as a standalone story. It could be called "Mommy's Time-out(??): Babysitter". Well, one could hope lol
As for Maggie, I hope she becomes more playful/aggressive in a mature way.
Oh, and I know how to "cure" Scott of misbehaving. Just give him to Carly for a week. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I certainly plan on having more raunchy scenes, particularly in later stories, and you can expect to see Maggie leading the charge in that department. I'd like to have Nancy show up again too if I can figure out a good angle for it. And I'm pretty sure giving anyone to Carly for a week would not only cure them but render them mentally incontinent.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 15: Extreme Makeover, Shrunken Brother Edition
Maggie keeps the tradition alive.
Author's Response:
She does indeed. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 15 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 15: Extreme Makeover, Shrunken Brother Edition
Wtf... I can understand he was in such a situation that the instinct to cover himself didn't kick in, but why on earth didn't he do it when she told him to do it?
Anyway, I totally agree with zephilia: instagram was a neatly idea, and well played -- after the phone I didn't expect anything worse to happen in the last couple of lines, and I guess Scott didn't as well :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I know it made logical sense for Scott to do as he was told, but these stories would probably be pretty boring if he was capable of rational thinking. I'd been wanting to use that Instagram idea for a while and realized this was a fitting place, so I'm glad you thought it worked.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 15: Extreme Makeover, Shrunken Brother Edition
Love the new chapter. I love how Maggies gives Scott choices and when he doesn't act or care shes like fine and then he regrets not making a choice. Secondly I love how she is kind of blackmailing him with the instagram thing. Hope she does even more. I doubt that Maggie will stop at playing dolls. I hope she has a full exploration and a full lis of ideas coming up to humiliate and make Scott her "doll". I just king of wish she was more violent I guess.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. This particular story is beginning to draw to a close, but now that we've pretty firmly established Scott's new relationship with his family, you can probably expect to see things get rougher and raunchier in the next one.