[Report This]Date: January 13 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 14: Prettiest Doll of All
Maggie has thw whole punishment thing down well I'd say.
Author's Response:
She has it down to a science.
Date: January 13 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 14: Prettiest Doll of All
His clothes would have looked larger if he had shrunken smaller :)
Calling her friends is worse than I expected, and about the clothes... well, I hope for Scott's sake she's not so devious to count it as "reasonable"...
Author's Response:
Good catch on that error. And Maggie's parameters of reasonable are very wide indeed.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2014 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 14: Prettiest Doll of All
Love the :niceness" of Maggie. I really hope she starts neing her usual "nice" self when scot is being punished. Also I hope the two friends are just as "nice". I must say I love the work up. You can almost fell her anxiety. I can see her quvering just wanting to call him a toy or doll. It must be frustrating playing it smotthe. I bet Maggie will not hold out long. Her bitchiness WILL break out and when it does..., lets just say I will [slightly] feel sorry for scott. Great chapter to break maggie in.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! And you can expect to see Maggie's truer self come out in the next couple chapters.