Reviewer: PoweredByCaffeine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue

Great job again! The kiss part was very well done, and I like how Scott is 1 inch tall. I think that's the perfect size for him ;)

Really looking forward to Maggie making an appearance!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  You can probably expect to see Scott at 1 inch tall frequently in the future of this series.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue

Great chapter always like the dream sequences, they kin of let us know more what the characters really want. Wow, this dream speaks alot. this sentence '“Thanks, Mommy,” Scott stated simply, a smile on his lips"' makes me wonder if he really want/wish that Jugy want put him in her mouth. I also cannot wait for maggie. I know she won't be quite so subtle in her "reasonable" requests and thats what I would like to see. I like Judy's cleverness, but Maggie seems (from the other stories) as if she would take the sruleness to a new level.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like the dreams.  While Scott doesn't consciously want to be put in Judy's mouth, I certainly do want readers to wonder what's buried deep in his psyche.  And Maggie's going to start things off with an unsubtle bang when she shows up, as you'll see soon.