Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 7: Awaiting Another Sentence

"Awaiting another sentence". Assuming that her law proposals are still just in her head... ok, I was speculating what may be next, but it was turning out to be such a long comment I decided to just wait, since you've already made up your mind.

(But I'll assume anyway that whatever new law she hs in her mind is still just in her mind, so whatever whe has decided its only going to be his first surprise -- you did mention this story would be a bit longer after all :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  For future reference, I am often curious to hear what people think is coming up next in a story (regardless of accuracy), so don't mind that.  You are right that Judy's got a couple more surprises waiting for Scott.  I've only posted half the chapters so far.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: Awaiting Another Sentence

Oh, I wonder if she intends to tell hime that she sees him as a toy or that she has disowned him and that if his little brother can't accept either fact than time will be split between her and Maddie. Great chapter though kkep them coming.

Author's Response:

Well, that would certainly be quite the twist.  It's not quite what I've got planned, though hopefully you'll still enjoy it.  Thanks for reading/reviewing.