Reviewer: Smushed Boy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Shortcut

Awesome chapter! I love our inshoe stories. I can`t wait to see Scott inside his sister`s shoes!

Author's Response:

You'll see that soon enough

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 6: Shortcut

So, looks like I've been finally able only once every two chapters :)

Fwiw count me in the group that prefers "subtle giantesses" rather than Maggie -- partially style, and partially the fact that whatever she has in mind Scott won't see it coming: the last chapter showed both of them, it was really THAT great.

And I can't stop thinking about that italicized "home" in "Welcome home"...

 

PS

There's something which is not clear to me in chapter 5, "...then proceeding to pull on her stocking until it slipped tautly off the ends of her thick toes". Should it be "pull off" or am I misunderstanding something?

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I've already preferred at least one "subtler" giantess in the stories I read, so I try to do the same in the ones I write.  I realize that last description you mentioned looks kind of awkward.  What I was going for was the image of her tugging on the stocking and then just holding onto it in one place while the tension in it just slid the rest of the way down her foot and off her toes, if that makes sense.