Date: December 12 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: Booked
@riczar a possible explanation is that the judge specified how long while Scott wasn't listening, right before the beginning of the chapter; he knows it's supposed to be less than how long he'd endup being in jail, but he just didn't listen how much, and his family will find out and react (his mom will be even more disappointed, hi sister will laugh about it... you get the idea).
OR "indefinitely" means that something's going to happen afterwards -- new world order can be anything after all.
Or maybe... ok, you all get the idea, and I did say I wouldn't comment on each teeny tiny detail; sorry, I couldn't resist :)
(tnx for giving me something to look for while rereading it anyway)
Author's Response:
I like your thinking. I will also point out that "indefinite" means there's no specified length, referring to the fact that Scott will go up for review eventually.
Date: December 11 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 3: Booked
Looks like even #2 didn't teach him anything; even Susan was too soft on him :)
The beacon is a good idea btw -- I thought the story would involve some officer checking him from time to time, but an automatic device makes more sense.
PS
About Zephilia&AdamX's comments: I'm really really glad there won't be M/m; and the best one imho was the 1st episode, because I read it expecting "just another story", and so its goodness took me completely by surprise :)
(Also because it was his&Ella's first time, and again, that's a bit difficult to replicate in a sequel)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. At first I thought I'd go with the officer checking in, before realizing all the fun possibilities the beacon brings in for the story.
[Report This]Date: December 11 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3: Booked
This might be your best installment in this series with all due respect.
Author's Response:
Oh gosh, and we haven't even reached the actual fetish fun yet. Pressure...
[Report This]Date: December 10 2013 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: Booked
Oh I wonder what they will do. I just hope ther isn't much M/m interaction. Sorrt I love more F/m and F/f scenarios. Love this scenario though there are a lot of possiblilities. I just hope they are more cruel.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Don't worry about M/m; in terms of fetish stuff, this is F/m all the way. There may be some dialogue between Scott and his brother, but that's it.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2013 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: Booked
ok. Scott is officially a douchebag. If it was ME who killed that baby i would go to prison willingly and even accept lifelong. So, Judy, Maggie: GET SATAN ON HIS ASS!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! As you'll see soon, Judy and Maggie are in complete agreement with you.