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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Comes Crashing Down

Great atory, I just hope the girl is ok and cannot wait for the would of hurt for Scott to start.



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Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 2: Comes Crashing Down

jesus... Is there any chance the baby survived?

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We'll just have to wait and see, won't we?

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Comes Crashing Down

Cool Beaners Dude  reminds me of the old days, what I can remember of it anyway...;`)



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Reviewer: socksarecool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: Comes Crashing Down

Before I completely hate Scott and hope that his mother humiliates/degrades/abuses him with no remorse, is there going to be a chapter that describes what actually happened?(He may or may not be at fault here).

Nonetheless, this was an excellent chapter and I am looking foward to more chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  There will definitely be more information on this event later in the story, and most likely in future short stories of the series too.

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