Another great entry in this story my friend. I was wondering if there was any plans to include maggies friends in on the fun in the next installment. What ever happend to ella btw?? (on a side note do you have any current plans for an epilouge to Family Reunion, definitely one of my favorite stories of yours) keep it up man!

Great stuff, as usual. I like Scott's realization of the full measure of Judy's power at this point. Maybe you could have a scene where Judy takes pictures of Scott being forced to kiss and smell her feet (him scrunched under her toes) and either uploads them to Facebook and/or makes him look at them later with her, where she forces him to say how he felt in each scene and what her feet smelled like.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing.  While the Facebook thing wouldn't quite be Judy's style, I could certainly see her wanting a little more personable attention on her feet in the future.

I am a big fan of the dream sequences, as it allows you to do things to a chaacter that you don't plan to have them experince in "the real world." As you know, I'm a fan of the death-by-smelly-feet scenario, so if you're able and willing, maybe writing a dream sequence with that little scene at the feet of Judy or the sister would be great. Thanks for continuing this series.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Though this will be the only dream sequence in this story, there may be more down the road that explore ideas like that, given the heavy foot-focus of this series.

Yes, the image it makes perfectly sense, what I'm not sure about (remember that English is a foreign language for me) is how to interpret "to pull on her stocking": I thought that "to pull on" == "to put on", and therefore it sounded to me like she was doing the opposite action -- totally absurd. So if I understand correctly she is not "pulling on" her stocking, she is "pulling" and the action is "on her stocking" as in "applied to her stocking"? (tn xfor your patience anyway :)

Author's Response: I see your confusion.  I find trying to explain this stuff entertaining.  Basically, when I say "pull on" I'm not talking about pulling it up her leg and foot, I'm talking about pulling on the end of it that she has in her fingertips, meaning it's slowly peeling its way down her foot and off.  I realize it's an awkward action to describe, it's just that for really intricate interactions like putting on or taking off clothes in a specific way, a little awkwardness in phrasing is probably going to happen.  I just had a very particular image in my head and had to do my best to show it.

I check for updates on this story daily. I can't wait to see where the brother comes in. I like his attitude and that "cockroach" remark. I hope you use the brother more too. Keep 'em coming!

I can't say I'm a big fan of this genre (gentle fan here), but occasionally you drop something good in. Much of what follows in personal opinion, but some of it could make the story better overall.

A criticism I have is the duration of punishment.  You never said what it was, but the summary indicates indefinitely.  No fair court would make the punishment open ended.  Its either life-long, death, or certain conditions that need to be met for release (usually a period of time with a possibility of early release).  This would affect the mindset of the characters.  Life imprisonment would mean Scott has nothing more to lose and fall to depression, insanity, suicide, or escape.  A limited duration imprisonment would force him to take the punishments and try to be on his best behavior with him looking towards hopefully better things in the future.

Unless his lawyer lied to him (possible if his mother is involved).  He mentioned that this punishment is better and shorter then what he would have received normally.  Just didn't want you to forget that point.

An observation I should make in Scott's defense is that this has been brewing for a long time.  His punishments have been abusive and its his strength of will that hasn't caused him to go insane, which any of us would have done after the first time or two. 

I don't know how much longer this series will go for, or even if you have an ending in mind for Scott.  I do hope that he'll be able to eventually step away from this and have a happy life.

I've always loved these stories and I can't believe that you have another one out. If I may ask a request... Could it be possible to add some butt action in this as well?! You don't have to if the story is already written but if you can that would be freakin awesome!!! You are one of the best writers on this site. Thank you!

Author's Response:

I've already got this one pretty much written, so this story is going to be butt-less.  With what I've got planned for future stories in this series, though, I could see that being a possibility.  Thanks for reading!

I'm glad you're back, keep writing this story!

Yes, a new time out. Love this series. You said to sue you. I know ho har it is keeping ideas in your head. I gues Scott will never learn. I just hope they aren't as "gentle" for a lack of a better word. I would love to see some serious abuse.